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Your 'Love You' Was the Biggest Lie

Your love you was the biggest lie, And I feel so light; Why God did this with me, I'm crying; Coz your love you was the biggest lie; I'm wandering in the world like; Like I don't have anything to gain; And I don't have any site; Site to feel myself alive; Coz your love you was the biggest lie; And I feel so light; Why God did this with me, I'm crying; Coz your love you was the biggest lie... I see myself in a mirror like; There is only blankness in my mind; Like I'm feeling to die anytime; But why I'm still still alive; Coz your love you was the biggest lie; And I feel so light; Why God did this with me, I'm crying; Coz your love you was the biggest lie...

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Date: 4/25/2016 12:55:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Mayur.
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:41:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write mayur..
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Date: 3/29/2016 8:05:00 AM
Hey Mayur :) - I welcome you to Poetry - Soup :) - Thank you for your first poem, I look forward to many, many more in the future :) - Have fun, meet many "poet" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/26/2016 3:24:00 AM
mayur gelod, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Mayur Gelod
Date: 3/26/2016 10:58:00 AM
thank you so much SKAT, hugs back

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