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Your Love Shall Never Perish

You are my strong foundation, My rock of all ages. You are God's great creation, Who stands by me, in all stages. There are times that I'm low, With an empty, broken heart. Though I hide, you would still know! And help me from falling apart. My love for you will endless be, Though I never do express. How I wish you also could see, All the feelings I only profess. You're my love, you're my life. You, I'll always cherish. With or without a wife, Your love shall never perish.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2016 10:20:00 PM

Allan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Allan Joseph
Date: 6/23/2016 10:35:00 PM

Hello Linda, Thank you! It's sure good to have criticism, or how would one learn? I would for for you to comment. I'm up for improvement. I write a little less now cause the other site I use to post my post on was closed down. So a little discouraged, but I'll be back in a little bit. Thanks again it's good to have friends in everything one does or how will they learn? Allan

Honestly J.T.

Date: 6/21/2016 6:52:00 AM

Wow, awesome poem with strong feeling. good job -JT

Allan Joseph
Date: 6/21/2016 6:55:00 AM

Thank you.

Skat A

Date: 6/21/2016 6:22:00 AM

Allan, welcome to Poetry Soup..here you will find many talented poets who are ready to help you FlourisH among the communitY. Skat