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Your Love Is Always My Favorite Love

Your Love Is Always My Favorite Love –Chapter 1- Your love has been concealed in a special place In my heart, your love is always a favorite…it’s a dream of reality, not a ludicrous myth And don’t let me get started with your pretty face Always lightening the load…lifting up my frown – let us have fun and get it over with Your love is like sipping into the most scrumptious coffee With the finest, fanciest cream brewed with it Your love has been concealed in a special place In my heart, your love is always a favorite…it’s a dream of reality, not a ludicrous myth And don’t let me get started with your pretty face Always lightening the load…lifting up my frown – let us have fun and get it over with The door of bright opportunities is left ajar…you see? Will you slide right in or will stay in place, throwing an “I’m-confused” fit Your love has been concealed in a special place In my heart, your love is always a favorite…it’s a dream of reality, not a ludicrous myth And don’t let me get started with your pretty face Always lightening the load…lifting up my frown – let us have fun and get it over with Thank you tremendously from the bottom of my young heart For always being there by my side no matter what obstacles come our way Your love has been concealed in a special place In my heart, your love is always a favorite…it’s a dream of reality, not a ludicrous myth And don’t let me get started with your pretty face Always lightening the load…lifting up my frown – let us have fun and get it over with I knew you would be my best friend and guide from the start Whatever you do, do not give up, smile wide and shine on...like the grand day Your love has been concealed in a special place In my heart, your love is always a favorite…it’s a dream of reality, not a ludicrous myth And don’t let me get started with your pretty face Always lightening the load…lifting up my frown – let us have fun and get it over with

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Justin Bordner

Date: 10/6/2014 9:39:00 PM

This is a ballad from the tip of your heart David. The "Let's get it over with..." is a fascinating juxtaposition to the adoration, I love it! Its as if you're saying you wish to move beyond lust, sexual tension, and seize the total love package. Very intriguing! " It's a dream of reality, not a ludicrous myth..." that's stout affection. J.A.B.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 10/10/2014 6:32:00 PM

You're an intriguing writer as well..my sister reads your work to me and they are epic. Just saying that out of nowhere; :) anyhow, I have a poem-book coming out December 13, 2014 (on my sis's b-day - Laura's :>)). It's called We Welcome the Sun series. If you wanna know more or any questions, soupmail me please.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 10/10/2014 6:31:00 PM

There are going to be I believe five parts to this, but each one will get bigger or larger in size...more words and vocab words if you know what I mean! I need to work on my vocabulary skills and increase my English words speech-wise and writing-wise.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 10/10/2014 6:27:00 PM

it* sorry...sometimes, I'm a grammar or a spelling check nazi. Heh, I'm going to look up what juxtaposition is...that's a brilliant word...I just don't know what it means...xD I didn't mean it to sound like this poem has a sexual theme persay, but yeahh... I guess I subliminally meant to put it in there. How odd...hm..

J.W. Earnings
Date: 10/10/2014 6:25:00 PM

Yes, you can call itr a ballad. I'm obliged to have you comment on my poetry again. My sister really enjoys hearing from you on here. Read some more of my love ballads like Heartless Fire, LOVE, etc. Just look up love David Breidenthal AND you'll find pages of poems that are dedicated to love. i have affection in my heart...I like your interpretations of my poems. Thank you once again.