Your Loss

The day you left I cried your loss. Today I cry - just not as much. In my heart I feel pain. It just won't go away. Tomorrow will be a brand new day. I still don't know what it will bring. it will be a challange, that I know, but I will face it head on. I know now that nothing is forever. You left because it was your time to go. I understand now that in this world - we are just passing through. Another world awaits us, so now my dear I'll say, goodbye. Until we meet again, I won't cry no more - your loss. Before you left - you looked at me. you said - I love you, but I must do what I must do and in heaven, I will be waiting for you...
01/11/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/14/2013 8:54:00 PM
Lucy , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
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Date: 2/8/2013 9:13:00 AM
Sorry about your loss, I don't know who it was but I pray that you are consoled by the writing and reading of poetry.
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Date: 1/19/2013 9:51:00 PM
A beautiful poem of love and faith... eternity beckons for us all. You will be reunited. God Bless, Keith
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Date: 1/17/2013 4:18:00 PM
And in heaven he will be waiting for you. So sorry you lost your hubby and I am sure many tears have fallen. I live in Regina Saskatchewan Canada. The snow just will not stop coming down and will not stop blowing. We are getting a relief for a day and it will be 0 tomorrow. The temp. flux has been crazy this month. One day -29 and the next 0 --that's winter love phyl
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:47:00 PM
This is hauntingly beautiful, Lucilla...words are never enough to comfort us but we have our faith and that's more than enough. Stay strong. I love it! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/15/2013 3:46:00 PM
Heart wrenching piece. Reminds me of the saying "I don't know what tomorrow holds but, I know who holds tomorrow."
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Date: 1/13/2013 4:25:00 PM
Sad and poignant poem but beautiful nonetheless...sounds very much like the loss of a soulmate...looking forward to reading more - Tim
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Date: 1/13/2013 3:35:00 PM
A very touching write indeed. Light & Love
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Date: 1/13/2013 2:33:00 PM
What a wonderfully touching poem. How important love is. It touches all of us and brings so many emotions with it.
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Date: 1/13/2013 10:49:00 AM
Really good ending. Thanks for explaining the red hat. I am actually over 60, but never heard of this group.
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Date: 1/12/2013 10:00:00 PM
Sad but it has the right message. that your loved one is awaiting you in heaven.
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Date: 1/12/2013 5:19:00 PM
love it Lucilla,check out my Heaven
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Date: 1/12/2013 3:11:00 PM
That’s my girl! Life goes on. A new day, a new life we owe It to the divine! Determinedly beautiful! Thank you for you visit.
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Date: 1/12/2013 8:40:00 AM
wow this is so sad,Lucilla,, a beautiful poem....
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Date: 1/12/2013 6:09:00 AM
Sad to lose the dearest we have ...... but as you say, we meet again. - A very good poem Lucilla. - - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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