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Your Lips An

Your lips an endless garden, I would love to roam Roam in search of its sweetest fruits.

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Date: 2/6/2011 9:31:00 AM
With relatively few words, you have conveyed a nice message. However, in your second line, only one "would" appears sufficient.
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