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Your Lies Are Like Toilet Crap

A toilet is full of crap Like the lies I want to slap Right out of your filthy mouth My trust in you has flown south There is nothing you can say To make it come back today Every word you speak just stinks My breaking point is on the brink Of punching your sour jaw So I don't hear you anymore Whenever your talking shi- My fist wants to strongly hit Your grin that likes to hear a scoop And turn it into lying "poop" That destroys my faith in you Why don't you just get a clue And quit talking dirty trash Before someone wants to smash You into a gross dark dump Turning you into a lump Of the crap you have been spreading On this road that you've been heading

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/23/2014 6:59:00 PM
hahaha, I enjoyed your potty mouth style in this one, Robin. I am really curious what makes you write poems like these? A lot of your poems are ones where you tell off bad people. It's a very interesting thing about you. Where does it come from? Becuase I hardly think this is talking about anyone in your family! Tell me in a comment to me, will you?
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Date: 3/23/2014 2:38:00 PM
I could think of someone I'd like to send this one to, LOL. Love this powerful write
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Date: 3/21/2014 5:16:00 AM
My dear Robin, such anger coming thru your work, take a deep breath and do a spring clean!!time is too short its not worth it. Alofas always, Tiaua
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Date: 3/21/2014 12:07:00 AM
Somebody really rubbed you the wrong way! Good descriptiveness and rhyming in this piece.
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