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your just threre all the time

as i walk across the room,
i can't but help to notice you,
the things i say the things i do,
i can not say it can't be true
this i do i promise you.

as i walk across the stage,
i notice you, our eyes engage,
the things you say, the things you do,
i can't but help to turn all blue,
this i do, i promise you

as i walk into the store,
i notice you though the door
the things we say, the the things we do
this i promise, i love you

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  1. Date: 11/19/2009 10:32:00 AM
    Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Bree. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 10:17:00 PM
    Very nice poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 12:16:00 PM
    Well written. this too is a favoritee.

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 10:42:00 AM
    this is really good i enjoyed reading this poem it was one of the best i have ever read keep righting you have lots of talent >>>josh