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Your Hypnotic Eyes

In the sky I saw your face In my mind I reached out to touch it But when I opened my eyes My hand was so far away from you your smiled,and your face, faded, and I smiled. Closed my eyes once more, to see your hypnotic eyes drew portrait of you, in a breath and felt the breeze brush over me again and again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/21/2012 10:18:00 PM
IVY,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 11/11/2012 12:38:00 PM
That is beautiful! :o) I smiled...
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Date: 9/24/2012 1:24:00 PM
Ahhh..So romantic but yet sad..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara
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