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Your Heart I Hold

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Your Heart I Hold

I know I told you I fell out of it...
       Pride was a wall that just didn't fit...
                Black and white raining memories...
                       Falling slowly but clouding discoveries...
                               Thoughts constructed but a voice with no sound...
                                         Hand written rhymes that float around...
                               Some will sink in as ohers disappear...
                        Most will find pages and land with a tear...
                 Flip through slow and you can feel my soul...
      Swallow my words and your heart I shall hold...


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  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:09:00 PM
    this is beautifully penned and presented..JL

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:43:00 AM
    Nicely done Michael! I love what you said about rhymes - not all stand out but those that do make an impact and that's what matters in the end. Nice!

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 10:34:00 AM
    all written on an arrow head, Cupid comes to mind, here Michael, a wonderful poem from your pen as usual. enjoyed

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 6:14:00 PM
    Michael, your poem is beautiful.. always loving your poems.., thank you for sharing, xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 12:17:00 PM
    Oh, Michael, you have written a masterpiece here! I really love the finest of all your poetry right here before me! I agree with Andrea, your last line makes you poem stand out so much more, it is a grand line! Your words are exemplary and so touching, I feel what you were describing deep within my soul...I love this poem! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 11:33:00 AM
    Very lovely couplets, Michael. I just love the pattern you made with your poem too. Awesome final line.

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:56:00 AM
    this was very sweet michael.. hope you are having a wonderful sunday.. cory

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 7:42:00 AM
    Happiness comes happiness goes love will always remain. Have a lovely Sunday. oxox hug Anne-Lise :)