Your Heart

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Your heart: the dance floor I sway to pounding heartbeats lost in the music Eileen Manassian

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Tim Smith

Date: 2/4/2015 9:19:00 AM

Amazing Eileen...Love is that song I hear you singing...good for you

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/1/2015 8:17:00 PM

I like this verse! (: Dancing to heartbeats.. wow, an awesome image. Gorgeous piece! Always, Laura

Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/1/2015 5:35:00 PM

Wow, I love when we mix art and poetry, this is a gem of a poem!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 2/1/2015 4:36:00 PM

beautifully painted eileen excellent pen dear friend

David Meade

Date: 2/1/2015 2:37:00 PM

The motion in this love dance is like a kaleidoscope of colors . . . wild, free, and pulsating with life . . . becoming one with the music of the heart.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/1/2015 2:01:00 PM

Passionately lovely!! Dance on Eileen:) Let yourself go...the night is long! hugs // paul

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/1/2015 11:03:00 AM

Love it... forget the worries of this world and lose yourself in the music... what a treat. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/1/2015 8:11:00 AM

What a lovely way to lose yourself.