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Your Gravity Forever Changed

YOUR GRAVITY FOREVER CHANGED Year of the feather, magical time, two souls entangled, love is prime. Mystery is in her galactic eyes, they see across the abyss of time, recognize me. Sweet ambrosia, in one kiss Release such mortal pleasure. Venus in body and form, My cosmic treasure. Dark skies mean starlight where galaxies, you and I, collide; scattered light, I am fragmented by your gravity, forever changed. NOTES: For the contest IT’S ALL ABOUT FOUR by Broken Wings, April 3/18. The theme of this piece is love woven on the backdrop of celestial references in a way that shows how love is a cosmic connection of galactic proportions.

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Anil Deo
Date: 8/9/2018 6:57:00 AM
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great footnote, to add to the Offering of flowers of love AND respect around us. INcluding those we sometimes take for granted. Shalom, shalom Poet Phil
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/4/2018 9:25:00 AM
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Hello Phil, Thanks for your recent comment on the latest co-write I posted. "Your Gravity Forever Changed" is a marvelously-written verse. I can see that it has your usual highest degree of consummate perfection as always!! Congrats also on your contest win!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/1/2018 8:18:00 PM
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Phil, great romantic imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/2/2018 12:58:00 PM
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Thanks for the love, Eve. ;)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/29/2018 5:46:00 PM
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Very lovely. Congrats in the contest, Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/30/2018 7:31:00 AM
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Thank you Andrea for commenting. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2018 4:39:00 PM
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This is a beauty, Phil! A lover’s delight! Congrats!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/29/2018 10:32:00 AM
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Phil, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this lovely and dreamy write, well done !
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/30/2018 7:32:00 AM
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So glad to tickle you this way. Namaste.
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 8:16:00 AM
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A great write Phil. Interesting Tanka, it can be interpreted as a metaphor for working through troubles in a relationship.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/30/2018 7:37:00 AM
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Good insight James, thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 7:17:00 AM
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Well done, Phil. Indeed "love is a cosmic connection of galactic proportions"
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/30/2018 7:38:00 AM
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Thanks for your help with this piece and for all your support.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 4/29/2018 2:08:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win with this well-written interesting poem. Enjoyed.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/30/2018 7:42:00 AM
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Thank you Susan, its always nice to have positive feedback. Namaste.
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Frank Sheehan
Date: 4/4/2018 1:28:00 PM
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Great write. Very creative and interesting. Good luck in the contest.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/4/2018 6:37:00 PM
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Thanks Frank ;)
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John Hamilton
Date: 4/4/2018 10:43:00 AM
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Enjoyed the write Phil nice to have you back, should do well in the contest!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/4/2018 6:37:00 PM
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Thanks John, good to be back.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/3/2018 4:30:00 PM
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Beautiful chain of forms, Phil.
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