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Your First Stare

is short-lived.
Like a crypt
yet coherently-linked
with your windblown hair
strewn with rubberclips poly-carbonated.

As a sneeze 
yet non-allergenic.

On its last seconds,
its supremacy 
situated along the alleys of lashes
tightly-knit my lips
as if all-perceiving:

as a snore


as a yawn

on heart's core.

Be that as it may
as i hang endured
for its sequel...

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  1. Date: 5/14/2009 7:09:00 PM
    Just read this poem of yours. I loved it! little wonder why you won first place. -AA

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 5:55:00 PM
    Gino congratulations on winning Johns contest - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 12:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on your first place win.

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 12:13:00 PM
    Congratulations on your writing winning John's contest ... I look forward to reading more of your writes soon ... this site is overwhelming with folks to "comment" on ... LOL ...

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 9:53:00 AM
    Congrats on your first place win.

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 7:18:00 AM
    Congrats Gino on your First Place win! Well done! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 6:58:00 AM
    This is soo, I'm blown away. First place ...hooray for you, Gino. Perfect choice! Congratulations! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 6:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place win.. wonderful poem... Spirit and Soul, Constance

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 5:56:00 AM
    situated along the alleys of lashes..loved this line! Congrad's Debbie

  1. Date: 2/27/2009 1:43:00 AM
    well done... beautiful write! congrats on your win! ~ Arany