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Your Father's Eyes

I remember many years ago when the distant siren told us all the shift had ended. Yet! Six pints to be drunk before stumbling through the back door, his sweat still clinging to his face sealed there with in the grime of despair swearing every night, never to go back to that bloody pithead! But our need was he and his was the beer until that fateful day, when out of his misery he was taken, leaving us all for another world, his need of pain forgotten when distributed to those of us left behind. Yet every day I still see him in your smile in your ways, and when you are sad Dear Daughter in those beautiful ‘Ice Blue Eyes’. © Harry J Horsman 2008

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Date: 4/25/2017 12:19:00 AM
This is very nice. I wrote one called ALCOHOL :)l
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Date: 4/24/2017 10:13:00 PM
Deep and incredibly expressed, poetry at its finest:-) God bless
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Date: 4/24/2017 12:41:00 PM
Great write, a master stroke, spreading the misery of the loss and pain.
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Date: 3/7/2016 7:52:00 AM
Awesome win....Linda
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Date: 3/1/2016 10:32:00 AM
Intense write Harry, a wonderful sad story.
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Date: 3/1/2016 4:59:00 AM
This touched my heart, Harry. Such a vivid picture that speaks volumes in its simplicity. Top-notch in my books. Elaine
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Date: 5/14/2013 7:09:00 PM
Hello Harry, I chose this poem because the Chef favored it twice. If I were a member of the soup I would favor it also. Chef was in a great mood tonight and after I told him about responses to the blog his eyes smiled, which i have not seen for a long time. Thank-you for your support of Harry (HG). Respectfully Phillip - Flipper
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Date: 3/8/2013 1:21:00 PM
Dear Harry, Wow! as a newly Recovering Alcoholic ( a little over a month ) the first part of this Creation Pangs me but there is soothing in the "smile" and "ways",warmth in the image YOU see in the mirror of YOUR Daughter's "sad" "beautiful" " "Ice Blue Eyes" This POETRY MasterPiece is definetly a number one Favorite 2 times.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/18/2012 12:19:00 PM
love the feeling and emotions you share here Harry... I also like the like quoted " ‘Ice Blue Eyes’ " excellent...pd
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Date: 5/2/2012 8:36:00 PM
wow, what a powerful one I stumbled on way back on page 7. Outstanding work, Harry!
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Date: 5/30/2010 9:38:00 PM
A sad, but all too real poem and very well written. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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