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Your Fatal Flaw

You seemed to be perfection in my eyes Everything of beauty in you I saw Your pure honesty left no place for lies But alas, I’ve found your one fatal flaw “What could this flaw be?” You ask me so sweet Certain the answer could not be that grave “If I know my flaw, I'll give you a treat Why look so worried, dear? Tell me! Be brave!” So with a heavy heart I pierce your soul “It is pride, dear, PRIDE is your fatal flaw!” You look aghast yet say, “Why this is droll! Your argument is only made of straw.” “FATAL….for from your presence I now part. FATAL…for I bear with me, my dead heart.” Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/10/2013 5:30:00 PM
Ouch, pride does come before a fall. Most men have a problem with that one.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2013 7:49:00 AM
Well, Richard...it isn't gender specific, but I do believe that when it comes to love...yes, women are more giving and more capable of letting go of their pride for the one they love!
Date: 3/10/2013 9:11:00 AM
This is a real beauty of a poem. I love the third stanza. I piercr your soul. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/10/2013 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Lucilla. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/10/2013 9:20:00 AM
:) Thanks you for taking the time to read and comment!

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