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Your Face Behind the Glass

In a dream last night I was in a city under the stars I was walking down the street and you were driving in your car You were on your way to somewhere and I was looking for a bar You hit me as I was walking down the road I threw my hands down on the hood to lessen the load Then I saw that it was your face behind the glass As I maneuvered around the car and passed You never once looked up or acknowledged me I could only assume that you never even saw me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/7/2009 3:56:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup A. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2009 4:47:00 AM
Thank you both for commenting. Steve, that's part of what this poem is about, but not all. ;)
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Date: 12/6/2009 4:38:00 AM
Alot of times, the one we want hits us hard and causes us to fall but for them its not even a blip on the radar. wonderful write.
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Date: 12/5/2009 8:23:00 AM
Welcome to PS! Good write! Keep writing and thanks for sharing with us! Peace and love, Audrey
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