Your Face

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Dorian Petersen Potter.

(Etheree) Your face shines in the sun. Beautifully. Your smile adorns day. You bring me happiness. My days without would be gray. Your presence brightens all my life. Without you I'd be nothing at all. You're so beautiful just the best to me. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,9,2014

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/12/2014 11:01:00 AM

very beautifully painted piece dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 11:19:00 AM

Ah, Liam, you see now the face of my one truest love always shine here in my heart and life all day and everyday and that the way it is with me. :-) This the way I just feel in my heart. Passing you a big smile, on glowing eternal loves wings. Thank you so kindly for your very beautiful reply. And Yours Liam, my dearest friend mean a whole lot to me. :-) Love and warm hugs! xxxx D.

James Fraser

Date: 11/9/2014 4:36:00 PM

Beautiful words to someone special, James :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/12/2014 2:50:00 AM

Thank you James! :) xxxx D.