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Your Eyes

Your eyes remind me of Monet's Impression, sunrise. Like standing by the water, At five o'clock in the morning, Sea breeze and an oversized sweater. Full of promise and new beginnings. Like rays of light dancing on the harbor. Salty air and messy hair, I'm blown away by your captivating simplicity. I could dive into your depths, And never reach the bottom. Swallowed whole by, Your entrancing gaze. Floating in the pool of your iris, And delicate shadows. Overflowing with a sense of serenity. Birds perched sing a misty melody. With eyes closed, I take in the scene, remembering. This moment, your eyes, And the way they are so much more than beautiful.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/30/2016 4:39:00 PM
Hi Auden WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/30/2016 8:40:00 AM
Auden, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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