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They are as oceans, Vast, deep, and open; Unfathomable. I dive into them, Drawn in with each look. They are the night sky, A fractal beauty; Sophisticated. I would spend my hours Just exploring them. Windows of your soul, Exquisite blue rifts. Incomparable. With each fleeting glance My heart and soul soar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/29/2015 8:07:00 PM
very nice and romantic poem, beautiful.
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Date: 7/16/2015 5:50:00 PM
Very nice! Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/16/2015 3:04:00 PM
oh Neil this is simply charming a beautiful romantic write:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Neil Nelson
Date: 7/16/2015 3:38:00 PM
Hey there Jan, thank you for the feedback. Just changed a couple of little things hope you still approve. Just replaced a little repetition, hope it still carries the same feeling.

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