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Your Eyes

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Below is the poem entitled Your Eyes which was written by poet Karla Deal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Your Eyes


Your Eyes

Your eyes...
Speak to me of your love
A gift from God up above
Kisses so gentle, so true
Holding my hand under a blue sky
You touch my face and wipe a tear from my eye

Your eyes...
Such a beautiful shade of brown
Your laughter...
Your humor...
Your love...
Your kindness...
Never let me down

Your eyes...
Tell me a secret I hold deep within my heart
A love so true, and never makes me blue
"Babe, you say. I'm so in love with you"
I realize we've had some rough spots along our way
But honey, God will see to it
That our love is here to stay

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  1. Date: 9/1/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Lovely work Karla as is evidence of all the wonderful reviews you've received.

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Another romantic write filled with passion. You really leave it all on the page and I like you for that. Great Job! MC

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/29/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Again...thank you!! Karla~
    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/29/2013 4:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello Marquis, Thank you SO MUCH for your kind and thoughtful comment regarding my poem. I greatly appreciate it. I look forward to reading your poems as well. Have a HAPPY LABOR DAY weekend!! :)
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Beautiful & deeply expressed here. I always appreciate the "color" remarks: "Blue sky", "shade of brown"...they mean something true. Nicely written here! =)

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/29/2013 10:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem Drake. Have a great day!! :) Karla~
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 6:26:00 AM
    - A lovely written poem Karla ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/29/2013 6:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Good morning Anne Lise (from Texas). Thank you again for your kind words regarding my poem. Have a great day and look forward to hearing from you again soon. Karla~
  1. Date: 8/29/2013 12:04:00 AM
    The eyes, they say, are a mirror to our soul. Your words, I say, reflect the emotion, trust, love and belief you must feel when gazing in his brown eyes. I hope those "rough spots" along the way do not suggest eyes that lie - but. rather, indicate the eyes simply belong to a mortal man. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/29/2013 6:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Joe, Good morning to you from Texas!! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poems. In regards to "rough spots"? Well, we had a LOT of rough spots during our relationship. That poem was written to him a few year's back and we are no longer together. But it was for the best because I'm now engaged to a VERY wonderful man. Hope to hear from you again soon. Hugs, Karla
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 8:26:00 PM
    Hi Karla, Well expressed romantic write..Thanks.. Ken

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/29/2013 6:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ken, Thank you for the comments of my poem. Karla~
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Lovely poem. Oh if those moments could only last forever.

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/28/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Sandra, Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Have a great evening!! :)
  1. Date: 8/28/2013 4:20:00 PM
    Very nicely written Carla, thanbks for sharing....Peter

    Deal Avatar Karla Deal
    Date: 8/28/2013 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Peter, You're very welcome!! And thank you for reading and commenting on it. Karla~