Your Eyes

Your Eyes Your eyes... Speak to me of your love A gift from God up above Kisses so gentle, so true Holding my hand under a blue sky You touch my face and wipe a tear from my eye Your eyes... Such a beautiful shade of brown Your laughter... Your humor... Your love... Your kindness... Never let me down Your eyes... Tell me a secret I hold deep within my heart A love so true, and never makes me blue "Babe, you say. I'm so in love with you" I realize we've had some rough spots along our way But honey, God will see to it That our love is here to stay

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/1/2013 6:41:00 AM

Lovely work Karla as is evidence of all the wonderful reviews you've received.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 8/29/2013 12:30:00 PM

Another romantic write filled with passion. You really leave it all on the page and I like you for that. Great Job! MC

Karla Deal
Date: 8/29/2013 4:39:00 PM

Again...thank you!! Karla~

Karla Deal
Date: 8/29/2013 4:38:00 PM

Hello Marquis, Thank you SO MUCH for your kind and thoughtful comment regarding my poem. I greatly appreciate it. I look forward to reading your poems as well. Have a HAPPY LABOR DAY weekend!! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/29/2013 9:47:00 AM

Beautiful & deeply expressed here. I always appreciate the "color" remarks: "Blue sky", "shade of brown"...they mean something true. Nicely written here! =)

Karla Deal
Date: 8/29/2013 10:50:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem Drake. Have a great day!! :) Karla~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2013 6:26:00 AM

- A lovely written poem Karla ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Karla Deal
Date: 8/29/2013 6:32:00 AM

Good morning Anne Lise (from Texas). Thank you again for your kind words regarding my poem. Have a great day and look forward to hearing from you again soon. Karla~

Joe Flach

Date: 8/29/2013 12:04:00 AM

The eyes, they say, are a mirror to our soul. Your words, I say, reflect the emotion, trust, love and belief you must feel when gazing in his brown eyes. I hope those "rough spots" along the way do not suggest eyes that lie - but. rather, indicate the eyes simply belong to a mortal man. Nicely written. Thanks for sharing.

Karla Deal
Date: 8/29/2013 6:31:00 AM

Hi Joe, Good morning to you from Texas!! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poems. In regards to "rough spots"? Well, we had a LOT of rough spots during our relationship. That poem was written to him a few year's back and we are no longer together. But it was for the best because I'm now engaged to a VERY wonderful man. Hope to hear from you again soon. Hugs, Karla

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/28/2013 8:26:00 PM

Hi Karla, Well expressed romantic write..Thanks.. Ken

Karla Deal
Date: 8/29/2013 6:28:00 AM

Hi Ken, Thank you for the comments of my poem. Karla~

Sandra Ramacher

Date: 8/28/2013 5:37:00 PM

Lovely poem. Oh if those moments could only last forever.

Karla Deal
Date: 8/28/2013 6:31:00 PM

Hi Sandra, Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Have a great evening!! :)