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your eyes

when i look in your eyes
i see the moon
shining overhead 
like a angel in the night

when i look in your eyes
i see the oceon
crashing on the shore
like a big blue blanket

when i lookin your eyes
i see the sun
burning brightly
like a mass of beauty

when i look in your eyes 
i see the stars
twinkleing beautifully
like flowers in the spring

when i look in your eyes
i see the one that i love
the one that i think about everyday
i see you

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  1. Date: 6/18/2009 9:39:00 AM
    The eyes can be so telling indeed. Good work!

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 8:58:00 AM
    exilerating, it really moved me, just how much you love him! awwwwwwwww

  1. Date: 5/1/2009 8:37:00 AM

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 2:20:00 PM
    I agree with Dani! jmg

  1. Date: 4/6/2009 5:51:00 AM
    aww, that is very sweet, give my regards to the lucky boy.