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Your Eyes

As we were admiring the color of love last night, Appeasing our thirst like two cats in a fight, Your eyes were as shiny as the sparkled stars. They were as admirable as the lights of the bars. As I was starring at them with no ambiguity Fears, lies and evasions surround their clarity. But the reflection of love in them retains me From trying to quit being sentimentally a softie. Like the seven wonders of the world, They fascinate me with their eyelashes so well curled. Just Like the famous Eiffel Tower in Paris, I can observe their allure all the way from Ferris. They rhyme the harmonic melody of my heartbeat Because their beauty is so stainless and so neat. Your seductive eyes is my favorite site of tourism. They shape my emotion and imagination by Romanticism. Because of January 17th God makes me see, Their color should reflect the beauty of the sea Because another page of my life is just turn over I can only hope they remain part of me forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 4:17:00 PM
I just wanted to stop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/28/2009 3:13:00 PM
Again, Thank you so much. Those are part of my inspiration. sincerely, Jhonny Thermidor, Author of The Language Of Love
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Date: 9/28/2009 3:13:00 PM
Again, Thank you so much. Those are part of my inspiration. sincerely, Jhonny Thermidor, Author of The Language Of Love
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Date: 9/28/2009 2:34:00 PM
This is a beautiful love poem! I especially love the fourth stanza of your poem. Congratulations on getting featured! It deserves to be on the first page!
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Date: 9/28/2009 6:27:00 AM
Lovely! Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Jhonny.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 3:00:00 PM
What an inspirational view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:03:00 PM
Jhonny, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:23:00 AM
A Very Special Thanks to all of Yáll! Sincerely, Jhonny Thermidor Author of The Language Of Love
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature of the week, Johnny. Love and Light, Lainie.
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jhonny. Love, Carol
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