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Your Evident Beauty

In a quiet place The wind sings a lullaby I sleep in his arms A beam of the sun Finds me in nature’s bedroom A morning greeting The moon visits me Star children seek attention I am entertained “Master Designer Your beauty is evident In all you have made.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/8/2015 9:13:00 AM
Which one??
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Date: 12/8/2012 7:28:00 PM
Eileen, wow... your poem is beautiful.... PD
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 7:32:00 PM
PD.....you are sweet! Thank you for encouraging me! :)
Date: 12/8/2012 12:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your Haiku..Great work..Very descriptive and expressive..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 1:03:00 PM
Always a pleasure, Sara! Thanks for reading and posting. Blessings! :)
Date: 12/8/2012 11:37:00 AM
Beautiful poetry... nice dedication... great words expressed... hugs Michael
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 12:18:00 PM
Michael, thanks ever so much for your lovely post. You made me happy! :) Have a great day! Hugs!
Date: 12/8/2012 10:41:00 AM
Hi like this one , well done xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Mandy. Your praise means a lot to me. :) All the best!
Date: 12/8/2012 7:47:00 AM
He is pretty amazing! This is a wonderful tribute to him.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 9/7/2015 1:37:00 AM
I found it! Your first post to me....Richard. It's on a religious poem. Let follow the trail now...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Richard, for the post, and yes....He is awesome!
Date: 12/7/2012 11:04:00 PM
Nice write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/8/2012 12:17:00 AM
Thanks, Ravi, for reading and for posting. I appreciate it! :)

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