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YOUR ESSENCE Dazzled by your essence a phenomenal thing- miraculous. Birds flock in masses and dolphins more than sing. Your sun melts my cold disposition as the moon mends memories. Your cobalt lightening streaks a charge to help rekindle hope. © Kim van Breda—21 June 2014

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Date: 6/25/2014 8:57:00 PM
Our lovers should be bolts of beautiful inspiration, shocking our despair into humility, invigorating our need to share love. I love the unique lightening metaphor, I saw some gorgeous bolts during yesterday's fickle storm. I admire the efficiency and clarity, and honesty of tbis poetry Kim. J.A.B.
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Date: 6/23/2014 5:23:00 PM
Dear Kim: Good write. Good read. Nicely done. Leon
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