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Your Emerald Eyes

your emerald eyes still today mysterious, sea-green vanity carelessly ignores my ship to anchor there just for once. Date:20th March 2012

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Sandy Ivy D

Date: 3/29/2012 8:36:00 PM

nice'

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/28/2012 10:33:00 PM

i missed this one...oh no! Soup mail....

M.I.A .

Date: 3/21/2012 8:33:00 PM

ah, those kind of eyes that simply draws someone to drown. Beautiful Tanka!

Jack Horne

Date: 3/21/2012 6:22:00 AM

Clever write, Kash. Big congrats on your first place win in Susan's contest

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/20/2012 11:34:00 PM

Very nicely written. Enjoyed this.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2012 6:35:00 PM

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2012 6:35:00 PM

I really like this imagery, Kash!! You are coming up with some awesome short poems lately. I forgot to tell you, I really liked your sapphic stanza! Luv, andrea

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/20/2012 2:51:00 PM

nice one! i love the ship and anchor metaphor. well done!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/20/2012 2:41:00 PM

oomph, kashi... well done tanka that devours my senses.. lots of luck over at susan's.. where you??.. come over!..:) huggs!

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/20/2012 1:13:00 PM

Oh, wow....love this poem of longing, excellent emotion, that is not apparent at first glance~! Terrific!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/20/2012 12:16:00 PM

You did a good Tanka kash, good luck in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2012 12:03:00 PM

Kash, nice eyes.. or should i say catch... green eyes.. how hypnotising.. great poem..always..pd

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/20/2012 11:00:00 AM

You have described beauty as cold as ice, Kash. Well done! Is this one for the tanks contest? If so, a winner for sure. Blessings, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/20/2012 11:01:00 AM

*tanka