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Your Core

I can only kiss your mind, your lips speak words unheard and incredible yet your mind beautiful like a summer breeze envelops me so I kiss it lightly and innocently. minus lust and trust. I hug your heart, it reminds me of paradise, bright rays of sunshine and where muisc is uncensored and untouched. Its melody engulfs me and allows me to ride the wind. It is fresh and cool and original and you so I embrace it. Smiling. Singing. Safe. Your eyes embedded in my soul, I took a snapshot of them with my camera phone. They sparkle and speak and allow me to see who you are naked and vulnerable, without a facade, completely free. I allow mine to dance with yours, no audience, lips sealed. I love the parts of you that only I can see. I touch them frequently, helps me cope with reality.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2012 7:15:00 AM

Lovely and moving written this poem Doreen, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Doreen Wright
Date: 7/26/2012 7:27:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne Lise.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/26/2012 6:33:00 AM

Oh wow...smh..this was outstanding!!!! Beautifully written..hugs

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 7/28/2012 6:06:00 PM

Had to do a double take here...beautiful!!!

Doreen Wright
Date: 7/26/2012 7:00:00 AM

Thank you Sweetie...I am glad that you liked.

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/22/2012 9:31:00 PM

You certainly excoriated the storefront facade and exposed the inner core of your lover with this very descriptive set of words. Good interesting work.

Doreen Wright
Date: 7/23/2012 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Robert. That was my purpose and I am glad that it was served. Really appreciate your kind words.

Dan Kearley

Date: 7/17/2012 11:23:00 AM

A very touching write here,Doreen...It was very uplifting! Very nice :o)

Doreen Wright
Date: 7/23/2012 8:39:00 AM

Thank you Dan! I am glad that you enjoyed it :-)

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/16/2012 5:02:00 PM

great write Doreen

Doreen Wright
Date: 7/16/2012 8:45:00 PM

Thanks Richard :-)

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/16/2012 4:40:00 PM

! I know a few just like this, sweet beautiful girl * I'm still trying to navigate the new day, you know ? But owww, i just want to swim inside this joyful tide; deep inside the love love ride ... Love 'the naked and vulnerable' and, who needs a fascade ~ Beautiful * My luv, Rachel !

Doreen Wright
Date: 7/16/2012 4:48:00 PM

Ahhhhhh U felt the poem just as I felt your words...the love ride is a joy & a pain but worth both...thank U Rachel for your insight & touching comment ;-)