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Your Cherry Blossom Lips

My fingers' tip-toeing on your face stopped at the softness of your lips, moonlit night guided my lips to your cherry blossom, a gentle Spring breeze melting like wax engulfed us with pure joy. © kashinath karmakar 2011 by:kashinath karmakar( 20th March 2011) ======================= Placement:HM ;(March 2011) Contest :Nonet me a Spring kiss Sponsor:Michael J. Falotico ======================== Placement: 2nd;(June 2011) Contest:Whatever Next Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Date: 6/16/2013 11:58:00 AM
rereading your beautiful nonet here, kash and wanted to stop by and say hi while I am here. I have lesson plans to get to but I am nearly caught up with comments. You never told me how you were doing yet!! I miss our chats.
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Date: 6/18/2011 9:56:00 AM
yes to a great win, kashi.. huggs!
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Date: 6/18/2011 5:33:00 AM
Congrats Kash on your super big win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty write my friend..enjoy luv...
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Date: 6/18/2011 5:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Great piece, love the expression in the first line. Best wishes Em :)
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Date: 3/29/2011 4:43:00 PM
Gorgeous imagery in this, Kashinath...congrats on your win! Thanks for your congrats for "A Trip Out of This World" win -- much appreciated! Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kashinath! Beautiful poem. Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/27/2011 9:08:00 AM
This sure is a very sweet & romantic nonet, Kashinath! & very nice formatting here too :) btw there's a sneaky "s" that made its way in your title... hope you don't mind me pointing it out, just want to hel pas always :)
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Date: 3/25/2011 5:07:00 AM
a Spring kiss,indeed beautiful!
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:05:00 PM
Many congrats : ) Jack
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Date: 3/24/2011 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win today in Michael's "Nonet Me A Kiss" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/24/2011 5:54:00 AM
I loved this one the first time I read it Kash, congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 3/24/2011 2:55:00 AM
Very sensual Nonet Kashinath. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:54:00 PM
Indeed a pure joy to read. Some very warm congrats to to you dear friend.
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:12:00 PM
Great to see your poem's success Kashinath. Congratulations on your worthy poem's successful HM. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:20:00 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Michael, kashinath
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Date: 3/23/2011 4:36:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your HM in Michael's contest on the Spring Kiss.. excellent words for your entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
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Date: 3/23/2011 3:04:00 PM
Kashinath, Congratulations on your success in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2011 2:07:00 PM
Congrats on yopur success in my contest.. Thanks for the support..always Michael
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:53:00 PM
This is a very poetic and creative one..Wish you good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner to me..Thanks for visting my work "Laughable Experience"..Sara
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Date: 3/21/2011 12:09:00 PM
oyyy kashi! what a celebration of spring with your fabulous images.. winning's best to you.. come see my " bones in meditation." ..huggs, nette
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Date: 3/21/2011 9:32:00 AM
Engulfed in passion comes to mind Kash, lovely entry, good luck to you.. Hope your weekend's been good ;)
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Date: 3/20/2011 7:29:00 PM
Such a precious scene and glorious write Kashinath.. u are a romantic at heart luv.. good luck in the new contest.. your Nonet is perfect...luv..
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Date: 3/20/2011 2:23:00 PM
ooh lalala, Kasinath, I LOVED those top lines there. FAVE for this one!
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Date: 3/20/2011 1:32:00 PM
Very passionate - looks like a winner to me : )
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Date: 3/20/2011 11:45:00 AM
So erotic and passionate, Kashinath! Truly a masterpiece in perfect Nonnet form. Wishing you success in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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