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Your Canopies' Call

Your canopies' call to wake them up from their sleep... mere touch will not do © kashinath karmakar (25th June 2011) =============00=============

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2011 4:47:00 AM

just luv canopies Kash.. they are so pretty and u have made them beautiful in this piece luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/27/2011 4:30:00 AM

Hey Kash could you mean canape/tasty bite-sized appetizer: a bite-sized base of bread, cracker, or pastry with a topping, served as an appetizer or to accompany drinks ..cause this spelling gets you a tent awning? Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/26/2011 10:47:00 AM

Ah ok....I was wondering myself what would canopies connote- glad to see Andrea's comments below ;) Makes this senryu clearer to me. Wish you the best for this sensual piece, Kashinath :)!

James Foulk

Date: 6/26/2011 8:21:00 AM

great write. thank you for commenting on Clouds touching the ground.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2011 8:08:00 AM

Now that you explain canopies are breasts for you, I can get your senryu. Why not say "lovely breasts?" I'm curious to know where you saw them called canopies. Your poem is indeed sensuous!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2011 12:46:00 AM

kashi, you truly pulled me in .. suoerb!! winning wishes if for a contest! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2011 11:44:00 PM

It sounds romantic, Kash!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2011 6:34:00 PM

Deeply sensous write, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2011 4:43:00 PM

soupmail.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2011 4:14:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Oh! To be awakened under the canopy of nature..Great descriptive work..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/25/2011 12:33:00 PM

I sure agree with you last line Kash, good luck for the contest with this one :)

Tracy Edwards

Date: 6/25/2011 10:12:00 AM

Ooooo very nice hun xxx

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/25/2011 9:31:00 AM

Now this is a chart topper... well done my friend... Michael