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Your Breath Could Move Mountains

Your breath could move mountains The Himalayas used to be in France Are you pregnant my sweet young filly Or is that a watermelon in your pants I've seen better legs on an orangutang Nothing personal don't take offence Turn your head sideways for a moment Wow! Your nose is quite immense Now about the patchy hair on your face Was that from some childhood disease Your shoes must have to be specially made Bet you can walk on the Sea of Galilee Your eyes are like deep cesspools Your lips remind me of a rubber dinghy But aside from all these strange features You're better looking than my friend Jimmy © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 5/10/2014 10:07:00 AM
I'm cracking up Jack , you are Sooooo hilarious . love it Jack
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Date: 5/13/2014 5:13:00 PM
LOL Thanks a bunch Gwen!!! Silly man eh! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 5/8/2014 9:59:00 AM
HA HA.. JACK... another delightful read.. I am laughing.. and the imagery in this poem is wonderful... I am loving your poetry. Brooke
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:04:00 AM
Meant, "kick" but "lick" works too I guess! LOL
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Jack Ellison
Date: 5/8/2014 11:00:00 AM
Hey pretty lady... I am very happy to meet you and I welcome you to the Soup! Glad you got a lick out of my silliness, sweet thing! Loving hugs, Jack XOXOX
Date: 5/8/2014 9:01:00 AM
WOW... Such a description... And you're still around... Sounds like my old horse. Be careful who reads this or you may get a few whacks over the head... I hear that's not good for thinking...LOL... Are you practicing for a night of roasting someone?
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Date: 5/8/2014 11:02:00 AM
Nope... just in one of my silly moods, which are happening more frequently lately! XOXOX

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