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Your Better End

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YOUR BETTER END To be To stare To contemplate To risk To dare Once and again To trust To leap A Jump of faith To fall To land No one can say To forgive To forget Or try again To breathe To love Feel whole and place The fears The doubts To rest and then To grow To become Your better end *** January 20, 2017

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Adeyemi Joshua

Date: 7/25/2017 3:19:00 PM

Well Written... Well done!

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 9/26/2017 11:27:00 AM

Thanks Adeyemi :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/25/2017 9:39:00 AM

Very nice, Claudia!

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 9/26/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Kim :)

Michael E. Harris

Date: 7/25/2017 9:39:00 AM

Fabulous.

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 9/26/2017 11:25:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Michael :)

White Wolf

Date: 2/3/2017 1:28:00 AM

I found this in the best poems list! And such a sweet accent too! Well done, Claudia, great poem!

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 2/3/2017 6:20:00 PM

It is there??? wow... Thank you Budgie!!! :D

Darren White

Date: 1/24/2017 12:36:00 AM

You make wonderful readings to your poems, and your accent is musical and singing, I love it, always have :) So no worries!

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 1/24/2017 3:37:00 AM

Thank you my sweet friend! It took me this long to have the nerve to try my hand at recording it. I'm happy you liked... (and i hate my accent - lol :P )