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Your Absence

hear me call your name a hushed love song on the breeze spring becomes summer sun beams cause blistering pain and shine light on your absence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/14/2012 3:38:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one.thank you.
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Date: 4/13/2012 1:31:00 PM
Very pretty Rhonda, well done and thanks for all your great comments on my poetry
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:38:00 AM
Sometimes those steamy spring romances end with summer's "blistering pain," Rhonda. It's when the sun is out that I feel most alone. Tanka is one of my favorite poems and you have a beauty here! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:51:00 AM
this one is unique and I really like it!! Especially line 2.
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Date: 4/13/2012 1:05:00 AM
Oh Rhonda....glorious piece!!!big hugs,love deb...this may be fav.... :)
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Date: 4/13/2012 12:59:00 AM
captivating write...
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Date: 4/13/2012 12:46:00 AM
Rhonda, the light your talking about... has been filling empty spots around here... nice tanka... always...pd
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