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Young Lovers

Met you when the days were dark And the walls were high we both had the dreams of lovers stars in our eyes never thought Id see you break down and cry But when you saw my pain you bled inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/31/2013 2:21:00 PM
Sharing suffering can be beautiful, as you make it seem - J.A.B. %
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Date: 8/25/2013 10:25:00 AM
I guess you are saying that sensitive people have empathy. It's a tough thing to hide pain and then reveal it later. I can think of a lot of different applications from these words.
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Date: 8/23/2013 10:30:00 AM
- Touching, beautiful poem, Jay - Well done. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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