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Young Love

The bluebells swayed in the spring breeze, wafting their perfume in the air. He bent and saw a white one on the ground, picked it up carefully, placed it in her hair. Her dark locks shone were washed anew, the white flower looked so right lying there. She smiled a dimpled smile to say, “thank you”, All he could do was stand and stare At the blue green colour of her eyes, showing the trust, that only the young can do. He gently took her hand, to her surprise he kissed her fingers, but missing two. We best walk home she said with a smile Better we don't stay in this field alone. He nodded, turned away to climb back over the stile two little five year olds, on their way home. Penned 7 May 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/25/2015 9:42:00 AM
Awww this soooo sweet! Well done.. i can totally picture it and see the love and adoration in that young gilrs eyes : )
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Date: 5/19/2015 5:16:00 PM
Congrats on your HM Seren..'
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Date: 5/19/2015 9:32:00 AM
SEREN:) Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. That was nice of Justin------ Forever *SKAT*
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Date: 5/7/2015 12:54:00 PM
awww!This is so sweet, Seren! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/9/2015 4:02:00 AM
Yes Kim such a sweet innocent age....Seren
Date: 5/7/2015 8:54:00 AM
Well done.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/9/2015 4:01:00 AM
thanks so much Charles ....Seren
Date: 5/7/2015 8:28:00 AM
WOW...what a surprise ending! WOW Loved it....thanks
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/9/2015 4:01:00 AM
lol glad the last time was a wow....Seren

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