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Young Looking Lady In the Tunnel

As I passed on The sign on The chair that says: Martin place A young looking lady With brown hair And blue dress Smile at me. I myself smile at her As a response And I think its a very reational response Instantly about 5 seconds Our eyes f*c*k. She didn't say word I got some of it In my head Unspoken though Then the tunnel exhales Wind sweeping On her perfume Only small amount I could smell The train blows its breath And its approaching like a bull Then it stops in front of her She expand her chest And I can hear my eyes screaming For her to stay there And continue this sensual Eye romance Just for one minute Strangely I think She heard my inner scream She stop and give a smile But her feet takes her towards the train The door close As she disappear I Try to look for any resemblance of her I think it was also blown by the train Even her scent was gone. Now Im alone i felt like smoking I grab my left pocket And I still have a half of it The cigarette I lit a stick Rode the escalator I feel like walking on the crowded street of George street. Maybe I will one day see her agin hundred days from now This young looking lady With blue dress who smile at me. -comments please mate- TY

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Date: 6/19/2013 1:49:00 PM
Mon, thank you for sharing this story about a lady, down your path. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/19/2013 8:01:00 AM
Hi Mon Carlo, hopefully you get to see her again one day. great imagery, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:11:00 AM
Hey, Carlo! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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