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Young In the Dream

Young in the dream in loneliness alone. Memory searching for name the day. In the paper touching a tear... Young in the youth and our book open in last page.... Vali Tsironi (from my second poetry collection "Amphorae's of the sea")

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Skat A

Date: 7/2/2016 12:58:00 AM

Vali, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Vali Tsironi
Date: 7/3/2016 4:41:00 AM

Thank you very much for your words SKAT! Very helpfully for me! All my best for you to! Vali

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2016 5:28:00 PM

Lovely, yet sad seeing that this could well have been the premature end of a relationship. Luckily the young have the benefit of time and new experiences. ~ Regards // paul

Vali Tsironi
Date: 6/29/2016 1:04:00 PM

Well, this is the first poem of my 2nd published poetry collection "Amphorae of the sea" published at 1996. Thanks for your thoughts Paul! Precious!

Tim Smith

Date: 5/18/2016 3:57:00 PM

A deep poem Vali...To be alone at the end of the book is quite sad.

Vali Tsironi
Date: 6/29/2016 1:22:00 PM

A great thought Tim! Thanks!