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Young Dreams

Woven through the fabric of forever Sits a kingdom shrouded in the mist A castle built with youths imagination It's spires and steeples were once heaven kissed Today the once proud land has been abandoned Still, around the corner there may wait Young dreamers who will rebuild all the fences A new road, or a secret gate
11/13/2011 Written for 'In a land called fantasy" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/23/2011 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "In a land called fantasy" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/23/2011 8:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/23/2011 8:40:00 AM
Appreciate it Carol
Date: 11/22/2011 5:29:00 PM
very well done Bob. congratulations to you on a deserving win. Like the way you weaved that line in so subtly. great job of it and thanks for the comment
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Date: 11/22/2011 10:16:00 PM
Appreciate your comments Robert
Date: 11/22/2011 5:25:00 PM
Congrats Bob on a superb win for this great entry luv.. most exellent piece ..
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Date: 11/22/2011 10:17:00 PM
Thanks very much Linda-Marie
Date: 11/22/2011 3:45:00 PM
see it there amongst the mountains, turrets there amongst the mist, nicely told great recounting, yes this surely bliss.....
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Date: 11/22/2011 10:17:00 PM
Thank you Don.
Date: 11/13/2011 9:35:00 PM
Bob, i like to think it was all a secret.. love the imagination built here...good luck in the contest ...Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA
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Date: 11/13/2011 10:04:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Linda
Date: 11/13/2011 8:35:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Bob. I really like the way it flows so smoothly. Kim
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Date: 11/13/2011 10:05:00 PM
Many thanks Kim. Appreciate your comments
Date: 11/13/2011 9:11:00 AM
Fine Poetry my friend.... Michael
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/13/2011 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Michael

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