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You Writhe Beneath Me

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You Writhe Beneath Me



You writhe beneath me in the heat of passion Our bodies moving in rhythm The whole world seems to be exploding around us To love's sweet kingdom we're driven This passion I'm experiencing is most exquisite Like making love the very first time Your sexual talents surpass all I've yet known True abandon, a feeling so sublime We're transported to a world of ecstatic pleasures Alone, we float above our presence Oblivious to reality, to everything that surrounds us My darling, my magnificent obsession Then that moment arrives, we're frozen in time Praying the rapture would last With a brilliant flash and a feeling exquisite In unison we expel a last gasp A soft gentle moan, then collapse in exhaustion Wrapped in each others embrace As we gently murmur sweet passionate love words While I tenderly kiss your sweet face © Jack Ellison 2014

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  1. Date: 1/26/2014 2:52:00 PM
    Another great one!! Always, Laura

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 1/26/2014 9:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    What is happening to this old guy...YIKES! Need to go lie down now! LOL Love ya Laura! Hugs XOXOX
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 3:23:00 PM
    Oh No! Dragon left during the first poem... but the penguins are interested.... They seem to have snuggling down to an art...

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 1/19/2014 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    They did it to me again dear Carol! Why??? So this was finally too much for that Dragon guy! LOL Mission accomplished! XOXOX
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 1/19/2014 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Read below... there are multitude who can't imagine the Soup without you! I can only say, PLEASE DON'T LEAVE but understand if it's your true wish! We all love you to the moon, sweet thing! I send you all the sweetest loving hugs I can muster!!! So what nickname have you come up with for me... Flo calls me Studley! LOL XOXOX
  1. Date: 1/19/2014 6:05:00 AM
    Dear dear.....Becca needs a talking to for this, Kenny....Lovely piece....Superbly written...full of love and longing.

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 1/19/2014 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I truly believe her mind is made up! Besides Rebecca knows who her true friends are here and knows none of us want her to leave! Rebecca!!! If you're reading this, please please stay! I NEED you... we all need you! PLEEEEEEAASSE stay!
    Manassian Avatar Eileen Manassian
    Date: 1/19/2014 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jack....go to the blogs and have a read....Becca wants to leave....See what you can do!
    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison
    Date: 1/19/2014 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    YUP! It's all Rebecca's fault! You are so sweet my dear Eileen... thanks a whole big bunch!!! LOve and kisses from Canada! XOXOXOX