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Scared to let anyone in my frightened heart shut you out. And though rooted deep within love was unable to sprout. Building walls to be alone anxiety fed my fears. And counting sins to atone I suffered anguish and tears. My outlook on life’s far view was distorted by despair. But focusing on what's true I found you were always there. When I looked into your eyes a smile soon replaced my frown. And just then, to my surprise one of my walls tumbled down. I peeked past that heap of dust, as more walls began to tip. And I saw a glint of trust as my footing gained a grip. I once thought I'd never cope or feel what I've never felt. But depression turned to hope, and my heart began to melt. Your love filled my broken heart, and suddenly life felt right. But you were there from the start ‘twas fear that obscured my sight. (Quatrain) 11/21/2015

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Date: 3/16/2018 1:56:00 PM
Striking structure: "I peeked past that heap of dust and more walls began to tip. For I saw a glint of trust as my footing gained a grip." Well done, Emile.
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Date: 3/16/2018 2:18:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and encouragements are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/7/2015 1:56:00 PM
Hi Emile, a nice romantic poem. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2015 4:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra, I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 12/7/2015 3:04:00 AM
Congratulations Emile on your winning write.
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 12/7/2015 12:25:00 AM
So very nicely written, heartfelt. Well done.
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 12/6/2015 11:21:00 PM
Wow Emile a great romantic write.. Congrats on big win!~
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 12/6/2015 5:15:00 PM
This was a very heartfelt poem. Emile, thank you for joining my contest. SKAT
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate the opportunity and your continued encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 12/6/2015 5:15:00 PM
Emile <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I will check it out. Emile.
Date: 11/22/2015 6:34:00 AM
this nourishes my heart, emile... lyrical and tender quill!.. huggs
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Date: 11/22/2015 8:58:00 AM
Ah thanks Nette, what a nice thing to say, you honor me. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 10:53:00 PM
Now thats one romantic beautiful poem Emile!
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Date: 11/22/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, I'm pleased that you liked it. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 6:32:00 PM
So beautiful. Thank you for sharing, Emile.
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Date: 11/22/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your encouragement and support. Emile.
Date: 11/21/2015 12:07:00 PM
How lovely, Emile. I hope this one is based on reality.
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Lin, all my poems are based on reality, just not mine. Emile.

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