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You Turned the Lights Back On (For Carol)

there are these nine muses who are good friends with Apollo. there use to be ten but one of them lives with me now. I worry often about losin' her back to the Gods and never seein' her again. so now I want to dip her in ambrosia to make her immortal just like Thetis did for Achilles. but there's always gonna' be a weak spot where love and life can just pack-up and leave. but for now she's my muse and I love her. her name is Carol.

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Date: 2/27/2024 12:16:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:51:00 PM
HARRY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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