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You Turn Me On

You turn me on, you make me misty-eyed, My nascent science of love, years back, When I followed you downstream, to bloom it began, The sight of flowers blossom, in earnest we did invest, Your frail hands, soft and tender, Your electric touch, skin-deep not, You taught me to watch the stars, in reflection I wondered, The Antares and Aldebaran, caught my sigh, Provoked, you opened the gates to your heart, You filled me in, you turned me on, Oh the Aroma, and the beauty to behold, Two star-crossed lovers, As breath-taking as the Maasai Mara, we opened to a new world Full of life, Full of energy, Reasons why you turn me on!

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Date: 5/26/2016 1:20:00 PM
A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share
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Date: 9/30/2013 11:39:00 AM
Star - crossed lovers" - a fine theme for a poem. Reminds me of a song by Emerson, Lake and Palmer entitled "Still, you turn me on". Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/24/2013 7:03:00 PM
Wow...awesome..congratulations
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Hassan Haji
Date: 6/27/2013 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Donna.
Date: 6/20/2013 3:37:00 PM
Hassan congratulations on your win. I look forward in reading more of your poems. Welcome to PS. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Hassan Haji
Date: 6/21/2013 12:49:00 AM
Thank you Connie for the gesture!
Date: 6/20/2013 1:44:00 PM
Hassan, ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA
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Hassan Haji
Date: 6/21/2013 1:04:00 AM
Thank you PD for always seeing me grow in this community! I'll never hesitate to stop by your poems.

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