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You Took My Hand

Held out my hand You took it. I did not comprehend, Held out my hand, Life is one big demand. Said "Come let us sit", Held out my hand You took it. Wants to be my friend. Penned 23/07/2014

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Date: 7/23/2014 8:09:00 AM
Lovely sweet write Seren,, loved it //
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/23/2014 7:23:00 PM
Haven't tried this form before...thank you Seren
Date: 7/22/2014 11:56:00 PM
Charming... Short and sweet Seren...hugs Tim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 7/23/2014 7:22:00 PM
Thx Tim ...Seren

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