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You Told Me So

You Told Me So I remember you told me that relationships that start with a spark, Always ends dim with a vivid light. Why am I the one to experience this painful sight? At first it was a joke, the reality of it feels like Being stabbed in the stomach and saying "it will be okay" You Told me so Like a moth being too close to the light Killed by that which you cherished most. It was said that life is not fair This is not just a saying, there's a meaning to it You told me so In order to survive in life you need to give in half of you And not even expect a thank you. My ignorant mind was too proud to believe Until my naked eyes begged to be covered for relief What I've seen is inevitably strange to the mind You told me so "She's just a girl, what does she know?" Mind of an ignorant man. I've realised being male doesn't make you tough Admitting to reality and facing facts is more manly Than a bearded man lifting 80 pound weights in gym I feel like rewinding my life to where we first met So I could undo all the things you told me not to do Now that it's too late, only do I realise But I'm not ashamed to say YOU TOLD ME SO.

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Date: 9/7/2016 1:12:00 PM
Ramadhan Dunia , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:27:00 PM
Ramadhan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/6/2016 1:07:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome SKAT... I would also like to read your lovely work... I assure you that YOU and I are going to be very good poetry BUDDIES SKAT :)

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