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In Silk and Dreams, breakfast at Tiffany’s nights of lavender lace, mornings with dew a highlighted garden of mysteries waterfall wishes, windblown thoughts of you In a playground of desire, succeeded candle flickering a flame, whispers true a familiar song- Just What I Needed waterfall wishes, windblown thoughts of you In a Shakespearean Sonnet, refrain nights of lavender lace, mornings with dew echos in flight, blossoms against the rain waterfall wishes, windblown thoughts of you In blushing shades and twilight symphonies In Silk and Dreams, breakfast at Tiffany’s ____________________ * Just a little Scribble * (Because Love is in the Air) Songs ~ Deep Blue Something - Breakfast At Tiffany's The Cars - Just What I Needed (1978)

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Running Wolves

Date: 10/3/2020 9:46:00 PM

everyone longs to be in someone's thoughts....

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2020 6:39:00 AM

The longing can be unbearable at times. Other times, it surrounds the heart at just the right moment. Thank you Robert. :) Brandy

Charlie Knowlton

Date: 3/30/2020 9:59:00 AM

Again! Another original and beautifully written poem by Brandy Nicole.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/30/2020 8:01:00 PM

So kind of you to say. Just lingering in music and poetic thoughts. Thank you Charlie. :) Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/26/2020 4:17:00 PM

Hi Brandy, your scribbles are symphonies from the heart, emotions flowing down the page. The wonderful lines do paint gentle emotions in the heart. Music does inspire the heart to sing and your heart does sing so well, Brandy. I love the content. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs....Mike. XX. A Fav

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/26/2020 8:38:00 PM

So kind of you to read my poetry. Thank you Mike. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Music truly inspires me. I appreciate you. Thank you for placing this in your favorites. :) Hugs, Brandy

Honesty Oimbo

Date: 3/20/2020 8:02:00 AM

IT is a good poem. It sounds that you want to present an experimental work of art. I like it

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/20/2020 4:02:00 PM

Thank you. Music and art truly inspire me. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Running Wolves

Date: 3/19/2020 1:48:00 PM

Oh my absolutely wonderful as always dear Poetess...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/19/2020 2:19:00 PM

Thank you Robert. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/18/2020 10:56:00 AM

Beautiful lines full of emotional impact. I loved the read!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/18/2020 8:30:00 PM

So kind of you to say. Thank you CayCay. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Lewis Raynes

Date: 3/18/2020 2:09:00 AM

Such a relaxing read, lovely

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/18/2020 8:29:00 PM

:) Thank you Lewis. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. :) Brandy

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/17/2020 1:04:00 PM

Your sweet poetry surrounds your reader with feelings of glee, contentment, serenity and gratitude! So wonderful a read, dear Brandy! And thank you so much for sharing beautiful feels! My warmest wishes.. Love and hugs.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/17/2020 9:23:00 PM

Dear Besma, you are always so kind and thoughtful. Your thoughts caress gently around me and my heart. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. For being here, for being you. Many wonderful blessings to you my dear friend. :) Hugs and Love, Brandy

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/17/2020 8:44:00 AM

Impressive and expressive. You did this perfectly. Hugs Rick.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/17/2020 9:21:00 PM

Thank you Rick. So kind of you to say. Just lingering in words and in music. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2020 3:05:00 PM

I really like how you made a new kind of sonnet with that repeated line at the end of each stanza and coming back to the breakfast at Tiffany's at the end. Very creative work, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/15/2020 6:31:00 PM

I am enjoying this journey with Sonnet's lately, and music inspires me. Soooo, I decided to place them together. The repeating of certain lines just felt right. Thank you Andrea for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/14/2020 4:17:00 PM

Such a lovely piece Brandy, excellent sonnet with wonderful imagery!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/14/2020 9:20:00 PM

You are so kind. Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Becca Teagan

Date: 3/13/2020 10:09:00 PM

This is gorgeous! I love the repeated line, it really makes it flow. Very nice, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/13/2020 10:23:00 PM

:) Thank you Becca. You are so kind. I appreciate you taking a moment to read this little scribble of mine. My best to you. :) Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 3/9/2020 9:48:00 PM

Love the repeated lines in your sonnet, Brandy... Beautiful and soothing. Hugs Eve

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/9/2020 10:18:00 PM

Awe, thank you Eve. It felt so right, to repeat these few lines. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt

Date: 3/7/2020 10:20:00 PM

And I said, "What about breakfast at Tiffany's?" And she said, "I think I remember the film". Nice to finally see your waterfall wishes sonnet, Brandy. Your candles and dew and lavendar lace and garden of mysteries all play a musical scene of delight. Magical. A fav.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/7/2020 10:28:00 PM

:) Yes, the waterfall wishes are indeed visible now. I am enjoying adding music to my poetry. At times. This is filled with so many magical moments. Thank you John, for your lovely comment and for placing this in your favorites. :) Brandy

Paul Schneiter

Date: 3/5/2020 6:21:00 PM

I'm virtually certain it doesn't get any better than this. The imagery alone is world class. Add to it the flow and the story line and you have . . . what is another Brandy keeper--a masterfully conceptualized and composed composition. Bravo! Hugs/love, Paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2020 7:44:00 PM

Dear Paul, your kind words and compliments are appreciated. You always say such sweet things to me. Images certainly take the imagination beyond the sky. Thank you for your wonderful comment. I am smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/5/2020 4:24:00 PM

Another brilliant sonnet, Brandy:-) You're pretty adept at this form! Incidentally, I LOVE "Just What I Needed" by The Cars

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2020 7:30:00 PM

Music inspires me and my muse. :) I am enjoying this form of poetry. I know, that song is a Classic. Thank you Edward. :) Brandy

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 3/5/2020 2:14:00 PM

The poem is so lyric and each lines flows gracefully into the next. The overall impact of the poem is a sing-song kind of poem that is romantic and charming! Very well done

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/5/2020 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Kudzai. Seems this poem is filled with many magical moments. I appreciate your thoughts. My beat to you. :) Brandy

Paul Callus

Date: 3/2/2020 4:25:00 PM

Romantic and sensual...you tickle me pink (as suggested by your visual:)) The repeated lines are very impactful...You give Sonnets a new dimension. Regards // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/2/2020 9:36:00 PM

Oh my!! I am blushing, if I have tickled you pink. :) I give Sonnets a new dimension, such an amazing compliment. Thank you Paul. Yes, there is love, romance and passion in this. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/1/2020 7:18:00 AM

Verses of love and romance --I enjoyed the tone and flow, Brandy--the repeating lines add to the beauty of this poem. Certainly it feels like love is in the air--and it sings.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/1/2020 7:29:00 PM

The melody found me, as the lines repeated. Your thoughts are appreciated. Thank you Vijay, for saying my words sing. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 3/1/2020 5:53:00 AM

Mornings with dew in the garden of mysteries leaves a beautiful image in my mind. This is so romantic and sensual and playful, so you... beautifully written, Brandy. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/1/2020 7:16:00 PM

Such a beautiful thought, mornings with dew. A flower in bloom. I couldn't resist Thank you John. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy

Silent One

Date: 3/1/2020 4:25:00 AM

In a playground of desire... now that is some playground.... i guess we all have playground, but then we have others who want to take us into their playground.... great sensual sonnet.. nice flow...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/1/2020 7:14:00 PM

A playground- can mean many things. Emotions, the being. Of course in this case, it is what you think. Desire and passion. Love and romance. Thank you Silent One. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy