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Below is the poem entitled YOU STOPPED LOVING HER TODAY which was written by poet Vee Bdosa. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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The very least you should expect is emptiness
throughout your lifetime, pain and bitterness
there is no end that you can ever find
to end the never ending struggle in your mind.

They tell you, someday you'll get over it
and as your life goes on you will forget
but dying hearts know that's the thing to say
appeasement to the pass of time and dying day.

How many nights will pain be everything?
There's not a way to stop what love can bring
nor change the way you feel in any light
it's always there part of your life both day and night.

You think on death how peaceful it must be
but dead is what you are and constantly
so lay you down to sleep in any way
and then it can be said, stopped loving her today.
© ron wilson

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  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading the powerfully emotional write; thanks for sharing, John

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 7:52:00 AM
    Sir, for me I cannot... for I would not be me if I stopped. I suppose it boils down to how we define love. Peace and blessings.