Home » Poems » Jerry T Curtis » You Stink At This

You Stink At This

Ok, That's it ! So, I clicked and read your crap I know you think you are a poet But, the thought just makes me laugh I see you think that you are clever To rhyme the way you do But, can't you move beyond The Roses Red and Violets Blue I really, really think you stink And you REALLY wish I'd comment ? If I have to write a kind word I know that I would vomit Ok, I scroll to catch your name And I'll say, You're All The Rage "OH CRAP! I didn't stop to notice, I was viewing, My own page "

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Hello There

Date: 9/10/2019 2:54:00 PM

So funny ~ glad to have found this today =D

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 3:26:00 AM

Hilariously done! Great job!

Gry Christensen

Date: 9/9/2019 11:08:00 PM

Hahahaha,inqredibly funny. Love self irony, we cannot take ourself too serious.

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 2/1/2017 10:16:00 AM

Very humbleyezing! LOL funny plus a peek in the mirror:-).

Jannie Breedt

Date: 12/11/2016 4:48:00 PM

Hi Jerry, I dont easily get caught but you caught us all. Its a hoot. Loved it. My first visit to you.

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/6/2016 11:39:00 AM

LOL!!! loved it! very funny....this is smelling our own stink??? wonderful write, enjoyed it! Congratulations on your placement JERRY!!!!!//Love, Anu:)

John Lawless

Date: 10/5/2016 6:08:00 PM

very funny Jerry, I think I've visited that page...

Lu Loo

Date: 10/5/2016 8:09:00 AM

lollollol! Congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/22/2015 11:56:00 PM

G'day Jerry... you really have a noggin full of wit don't you, and by the way, your written work is not crap - still laughing - Lindsay

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/23/2015 6:17:00 PM

Hey Mate , Thanks, I love you're story telling almost as much as mine------ just kidding my friend--lol

Tim Smith

Date: 12/15/2015 2:14:00 PM

lol....I thought you were on my page : )

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/16/2015 4:36:00 PM

Only you would know Timmy---lol. Thanks for the visit

Mark Woods

Date: 12/15/2015 1:00:00 PM

Lol. There is a serious component to this though, and I think a lot of people can be their own harshest critics. We know what we are trying to say but then start thinking OMG what have I done.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/16/2015 4:41:00 PM

Thanks Mark, it's true, it seems the ones I like the least get the best response, and the ones I think genius----oh well---we all know what happens to those. lol

Jan Allison

Date: 12/15/2015 12:59:00 PM

ha ha ha love the twist at the end Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx7

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/16/2015 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Jan. God Bless

Lin Lane

Date: 12/15/2015 12:56:00 PM

Jerry, I was ready to slap you silly until I got to the bottom...love the humor. Well done.

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 12/16/2015 4:44:00 PM

Hey Lin, If I ever step out of line, May you be the first to slap me silly, LOL and thanks for your comment.