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You Still Surface Me

you still surface me like a blue tide in the sand immersed in your touch- like pebbles on the soft beach engulf me with shores of thirst Date Written: September 18, 2016

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Date: 4/11/2017 8:52:00 PM
CONGRATS Laura to win top on this wonderful five-liner. Love
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Date: 4/9/2017 8:12:00 PM
this is so beautiful. and what a nice picture you put with it, Laura. BIG congrats to you
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Date: 4/9/2017 3:34:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Laura
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Date: 4/9/2017 11:14:00 AM
Lovely Tanka Laura, congratulations...
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Date: 1/13/2017 12:04:00 PM
Beautiful! Congrats Laura! :-)
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Date: 1/11/2017 2:56:00 AM
Laura, Very nicely done! Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/11/2017 2:48:00 AM
Sublime! Congratulations on your win, Laura.
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Date: 1/10/2017 7:20:00 PM
Beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on our placement on this short list. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/10/2017 6:38:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Laura. Congrats!
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Date: 9/19/2016 7:42:00 AM
Oh beautiful tanka Laura,I don't know why this gem hasn't been reviewed yet. Brilliant write.
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Date: 9/19/2016 8:50:00 AM
thank you very much Miraj :)-luloo

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