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You Saw Me

You saw me. The whole me. You saw me at my peak of happiness you saw me at my weakest. Your words were the one things that help me up when I fell and made me wipe tears away that never failed to fall.You saw me when I was innocent. I am still your little girl but I have grown up since you last saw me and the innocence is fading. I know the difference between right and wrong because of you; you use to recite war stories of your childhood. I used to sit there and listen. Daddy's little girl. Than I had a shoulder to lean on, one that would never let me fall. You saw through the surface and into the deep.My eyes tell stories and you were the only one who could read them. Whose going to see me now? I don't think anyone will ever see me how you use to now that your gone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 4/19/2014 1:13:00 PM
very nice use of words and very well written....I wish I can write as good as you Shahana
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Date: 4/19/2014 10:24:00 AM
i love your poem, it touched my heart because it reminds myself.
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