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You Remain In Me

You remain in me.

Like how the stars remain in the sky,
hidden in the light of the sun
yet shining in the darkness of the twilight. 

And like a seed 
thrown on the golden autumn soil
and embraced by a blanket of snow,
you remain.
When suddenly, unexpectedly blooming 
with the first rain of spring.  

You remain in the depths of me.

While in the midst of passion and my racing heart
I see your face.
Then outside it drizzles,
but inside it rains.

And just when I thought
the slightest echo of your laughter has faded,
just when your song
stopped running in my head,
I'm awakened.

No more.

You're not with me.

Yet still. 

You remain in me.

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  1. Date: 2/4/2010 9:49:00 AM
    this is a great poem it is beautiful and im not surprised you've been winning contests! i loved it best love poem i've ever read by far! =)

  1. Date: 12/22/2009 9:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Rechelle. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2009 11:44:00 AM
    Dear Rachelle, best wishes on going through to the final round. Lainie

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 4:30:00 PM
    Rachelle congrats on winning the first round of ps contest!! Love Light Patty

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 2:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Rechelle! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/20/2009 9:22:00 AM
    Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 6:00:00 AM
    How come I read this poem...and immediately I fell deeply in love. My heart melted because of the words narrowed in this poem.I am inspired, Thank you for writing. No wonder it was featured.

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:56:00 PM
    Rechelle, this is absolutely beautiful! I'm so glad that it was featured, for I may not have found it, otherwise. It's going into my favorites. Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 1:52:00 PM
    Congratulations to you Rechelle on your poem being featured this week You've finally gained the recognition that you probably didn't seek If you're like me you wrote your poem because your heart had something to say You thanked us for reading by writing good words, accept thanks in return today

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 12:50:00 PM
    congratulations on this well deserved honor, this poem was a delight to read!

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on having your poem featured! It's Wonderful! ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 9:20:00 AM
    Beautiful writing Rechelle and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 5:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Rechelle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 5:10:00 PM
    this is such a great poem, beautiful and sums up how i have been feeling lately, set of the water works for the first time in a while. lol :) keep up the good writing

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 4:44:00 PM
    I like the metaphoric comparisons here. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 11:12:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us Rechelle. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 6:27:00 AM
    It is a lovely FREE VERSE...beautiful, tender, gentle. Light & Love