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You Noticing

You noticing me crying You noticing me being happy You noticing me being depressed You noticing my smile You noticing my frecklce You noticing my brown eyes You noticing my pretty face You noticing my feelings You noticing my shyness You noticing me blushing You noticing my braveness You noticing my courage You noticing me!

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Date: 8/2/2010 8:41:00 PM
Clever and cute, i see the bright side of your poem,, but a down moment when you start your poem. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/2/2010 3:40:00 PM
I sent you Soupmail answering your questions.
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