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You My Love

You my love are like poetry in motion you glide along with charm and benevolence when you walk by you strike a heart's chord i hear songs of love playing in my head you've mastered the technique of seduction yes you do have my heart watering i stare when you enter the room your presence demands responsiveness Oh my love i wait for the day when you will whisk me away in your strong arms of comfort where i will dissipate in your arms and you will announce your love for me and it will echo throughout the world then we will flee so unreservedly to our own planet of fervidness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/23/2013 7:06:00 PM
this is so sweet and loving. Lots of devotion and caring in each line. The imagery allows the reader to feel what you are feeling. Good job
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Date: 2/1/2013 3:13:00 AM
Nice poem, there is a nice balance of imagery with reflection. Ggreat job.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/1/2013 4:07:00 AM
well how nice thank you glad people are enjoying my writings

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