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You Man -a request by Mam Aiyah You as a man can fill up this world With the love of your heart, Let them flow into your veins As the oxygen of your spirit Goes into the lungs of your kindness You as a man can share the thoughts of your brain, Even though your memory is not that enough to complete the story Let your axon abound and connect to the spinal cord of your dreams You as a man can smile with your lips Let there be a good quotes for every word Of your mouth as they slip, Swallow all the sorrows, Cut the sadness of your teeth, make them fly away You as a man can show your eyes with happiness, Mix this with inspirations As they blink in with visionaries You as a man can smell the fragrance of nice posture Strain the bad from good using your cilia, As your thumb and index made it concrete And threw them at a distance You as a man can hear solutions, Can fight all the negative pictures With your muscles in your skeleton, You can build a problem killer device Energy is your emotions, You as a man can face all of your knotty points You can hold the sky, As your feet stay on the ground… Because you as a MAN, Is H U M A N…

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Date: 5/5/2014 7:50:00 AM
Hey jhucel!!! ..Congratz!!! your poem is now one of the TOP 100 hottest poem here in PS!!! ..wohooooo!!!! I'm so hapeeeeee for U!!! OXOX
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/11/2014 4:37:00 AM
THANK YOU VERY MUCH>>>>>>>>> AIYAH AND SIR JAKE
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Jake Ponce
Date: 5/6/2014 6:55:00 PM
Scathing hot hahaha
Date: 5/4/2014 6:40:00 AM
I envy the way you write, Jhucel. Your character shines forth from each of your poems. I'm quite sure, because of your poetic gestures, that you're a fine FINE gentleman. The world needs a point of view like yours.
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/12/2014 10:56:00 AM
ako si Aiyah ang mabahong_poet?!.. hehe... Yeah mga Ser.. let's create a group!!!!!!!!!
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/11/2014 4:39:00 AM
yeah. lets make a group...... then .. hoping someday this poems will be in BOOKS>>> heheheh
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/11/2014 4:38:00 AM
add me , jhucel29
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Jake Ponce
Date: 5/8/2014 9:12:00 AM
Ngayon ko lang narealize --- maka-sir to! Grabe kayo sakin! Anyway! heyyy got FB??? Let's connect and make a group!
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Jake Ponce
Date: 5/8/2014 9:09:00 AM
Poetry may be the secret true language of life! HAHAHA :)
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 1:56:00 PM
Apir?~.. 1/2,1/4... cool of you both!!! Keep penning!!!
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Jake Ponce
Date: 5/6/2014 6:54:00 PM
For what is poetry if we won't write about what's going on in our life? The way I see it, Most poems are all about relationships be it friends, family or a lover. Apir!
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/5/2014 7:49:00 AM
two thums up for that!!! . .:O)) poetry as diary.. hehe... i'm guilty!!.. :O))
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/4/2014 10:03:00 PM
THANKS Sir Jake..NICE.. kainspire-inspire naman po.. I usually wrote about true stories.. hehehe.. Yung araw-na araw na nangyayare sa buhay... For me POETRY is my way to show the true meaning of life
Date: 4/30/2014 10:34:00 AM
Hello Jhucel, I'm speechless. This is undeniably beautiful. WOW... Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful write with all of us here. Peace, Deborah
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/1/2014 10:37:00 PM
Thank you deborah... : )
Date: 4/29/2014 2:50:00 PM
AWESOME!!! FABULOUS!!! SUPERB!!! ..(sorry if I missed it on the date you posted it, jhucel... I was kinda busy those days... ) You made it!!! hindi ako nagkamali.. I knew that you're the right person who can write a very well written poem about this theme!!! I feel so proud and blushed!! ( OMG! special mention of my nae w/ " and " Mam Aiyah..haha) I'm gonna fave this!!! this is too much.. I'm too much..haha... Thank you for giving a life to my dream poem... Thanks a lot!!! :O)) oxox~~mwah!!! ^_^
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Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/3/2014 8:50:00 AM
my gratitude as always!!! ..Keep your pen high!!!
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 5/1/2014 10:40:00 PM
aside from school, its also my first time to have a request to write a poem, kaya ayan .. Your Wish is my command... : )
Date: 4/27/2014 9:12:00 PM
This is beautiful man
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Jhucel Del Rosario
Date: 4/29/2014 7:07:00 AM
Thank you SIR: )

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